*~.Rating your Warrior Cat ocs! (OPEN 2021)

*~.Shadestorm.~*

Oc by: @Lily-snow    

Name: Shadestorm (prefix: fur colour, suffix: something he did for the Clan)

A/N:I love the name! Though the suffix is used commonly in warrior cats, I barely see 'shade' as a prefix and that's what makes this name stand out to me!

Clan: FrostClan 

A/N:Frostclan is a name i see alot for people making their own clans but besides that! I think frost clan is still a good clan name. I would love to see what the setting is like in this clan! 

 Rank: Warrior

 Gender: Male

 sexuality: Unsure (never fell in love) 

A/N:Maybe he is  asexual? (not my choice of course)

 Personality: Shadestorm is usually a playful cat who cares about his friends and family. He is not the most intelligent but can use logic when it's needed, though he can easily be fooled into believing and trusting liars. Other than that, he is a truthful and loyal cat. 

A/N:I like how he has flaws and isn't made "perfect", But i would recommend adding more personality traits. ^^

 Looks: He has long, dark grey fur with a white belly, muzzle and paws. His eyes are described as forest-green and he is average sized.

A/N:I love his design! even though you didn't write a lot, I still think this is descriptive on how he looks! Also love how you described his eyes as 'forest-green' (really pretty)

 Backstory: The only thing known about Shadestorm's family is that they're rogues. He doesn't even remember them, as he was brought to FrostClan by a warrior after being found almost dying on their territory when he was only one moon old. The reason he was abandoned remains unknown (at least until some part in my story). He was raised by Snowfall, the mate of the cat who found him, with the cats he believed to be his littermates, Icekit and Pebblekit. As apprentices, the two found out that Shadepaw was rogue born, and helped him instead of rejecting him. He has also done something important for the Clan (I'm not going to say what, it will spoil my story), proving himself and giving him his final suffix, 'storm' (the story has much more reasoning for everything ;-;). 

A/N:(I don't quite understand.. but that's because you are planning on writing a book and don't want to spoil it.) It makes sense how he doesn't remember since he was only a moon old when his parents left him. I like how when Icekit and Pebblekit found out he was born a rouge they didn't all of a sudden be mean to him (like in most oc backstories) I have would liked if you gave me more context to this backstory though- (can't wait to read it!)

 Age: 14 moons

 Kin: His actual family is still a secret, but: Snowfall (mother), Falconwing (father), Pebblespirit (brother), Iceheart (sister) 

A/N:I love all of their names!

 Any other facts: Shadestorm is also known for unusual fighting skills, though his hunting skills are questionable.

A/N:yes. just yes. 

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Overall I rate this oc an 8/10! I took off some points because I couldn't really understand the backstory much since you didn't want to spoil anything, and because of the lack of description in his personality. I hope you don't get offended! remember you don't have to change anything because of the rating if you like him how he is!