pov: u don't have a good feeling about this

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HIIIII it's been a hot minute
I have nothing else to say fjsjsjjsshsh

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Chapter 37 (holy crap 37 is a lot): Enne and Edmund vibes I guess

This was a nice chapter before WAR 😭😭

Ed gets sick bc his immune system SUCKS and I can't believe Nia wrote a TV into the story kfdjbsbs. GIRL SHE COULd HAVE WRITTEN HERSELF OUT OF THE MOUNTAIN CHILDREN SCENARIO BUT SHE SAID "we need 💅🏼DRAMA💅🏼"

Nia having an existential crisis bc she's like love??????? do I love Peter??? trust issues amiright

JSHSHS I JUST REALIZED ENNE CALLS HIM EDDIE PLSSSS idk why that's so funny to me-

"what is A pride and prejudice" 😂😂 like its an object im-

Not Edmund comparing himself to Mr. Darcy 💀💀

Anyways the tension between these two tf

Enne forgetting her healing powers is on brand

In conclusion, this essay demonstrates how getting a wholesome chapter before possible darker chapters is psychologically not it but I appreciate the fluff content nevertheless I love Enne and Ed thank u for reading

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Chapter 38: war things happening

Okay, on a more serious note, I like how real this chapter is with the war preparations and stuff. I'm actually scared for this war :')

I'm also scared bc Peter and Nia are saying goodbye and everyone is saying goodbye and I hate it

Enne saying things always work out for us has got to be some sort of irony or foreshadowing or some other literary device idk man I'm SCARED

"we don't want u dying after we finally get together" IS THAT FORESHADOWING???

literally anything could b foreshadowing at this point

Caspian is not it go away sir and stay away from Susan. I stg if he tries talking to her I'm throwing hands

Nia what were you gonna say to Peter rip. Was she gonna say I love u 😭

the undead soldiers better be amazing or else they're done for yiKES

the soldiers need rest and i oop-- Also the commander won't listen to Nia but he listens to Peter I am offended JDHSGSGSG

Okay I'm excited and terrified for the war goodbye

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