love note | louis partridge story

chapter 18

TIME SKIP 20 MINS

Louis: y/n wake upppp

he taps you lightly on the shoulder

y/n: ohh are we here yet
Louis: yesss wake upppp
y/n: okayyyy

you sit up

Millie: let's go

you all get out of the car and grab the boards
you zendaya and Millie all look at the waves and see how big they are today

zendaya: well what are we waiting for
y/n: let's go

you Millie and daya start running down to the bottom of the beach and will, Louis and Tom get down after

Millie: hurry up look at the waves
y/n: omg I can't wait

you Millie and zendaya take off your shorts and t-shirts so that you have just your bikinis on but you are stood quite far away from the boys

Louis: woah
Tom: that's my sister don't get any ideas
Louis: yes sir
will: wow
Tom: Millie is basically my sister as well so no

TIME SKIP 10 MINUTES
LOUIS POV:

Tom: are you guys going in
will: I don't know how to surf
Louis: neither do I
Tom: get your boards we are going in, y/n and Millie will be able to teach you quick and easy

Y/N'S POV:

zendaya: look at the three amigos coming in

she points over to wills Louis and Tom taking there t-shirts off and grabbing their boards

Millie: and with no t-shirts
y/n: what do you think Tom said to them
zendaya: real question is what did he not say to them, and do you even think they can surf
y/n: probably not

they all get in the water Tom swims to daya and kisses her on her forehead will swims to millie and Louis swims over to you

Louis: look at y/n the surfer girl
y/n: I mean what can I say
Louis: by the way ummm

he hesitates

Louis: umm you look really pretty
y/n: is that because you can see my skin and I'm in a bikini
Louis: no no no, you were pretty before very pretty and you are pretty now well very pretty but I just didn't have any courage
y/n: thank you and your not so bad yourself

you both smile at each other

y/n: okay now shut the fuck up so I can teach you how to surf
Louis: okayyyyy

TIME SKIP 1 HOUR

Louis: wait I've got this

he surfs a really big wave

y/n: what can I say I'm a good teacher
Louis: your not lying
y/n: why is the water so cold now it was hot an hour ago
y/n: look the sun has nearly gone

you start to shiver because of how cold it is

Louis: you okay
y/n: yeh I will be fine