chapter 13

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author:
(I'm sorry if there is any spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes throughout the whole book it's 2:00am)
TW: DEATH
TW: CAR CRASH
(this isn't a spoiler if you read the other chapters)

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YN'S POV:

you remembered that your parents wouldn't want you to be sad they'd want you to be happy

y/n: come on millie let's go find Louis and will they'd want me to be happy so I'm not going to cry for them I'm going to live for them

Millie smiles at you

Millie: I'm so proud of you come on

you guys walk to the shop
you see Louis and will and walk over to them

y/n: sorry something came up
will: don't worry
Millie: I'm hungry what food do you guys want
Louis: Pringles and Doritos
y/n: Ben and Jerry's ice cream
will: some drinks maybe Fanta fruit twist but I don't mind
Millie: okay I need chocolate
Louis: okay y/n and I will go get the ice cream and crisps and then Millie and will go get chocolate and drinks and we will meet her in like 15mins
will: okay sounds good
y/n: hurry let's go it's cold in here and I'm starving
Millie: okay okay see you guys in a bit

you and Louis start walking to the ice cream a different direction from wills and Millie

MILLIES POV:

Millie: is Louis okay he looked a bit sad and on edge
will: I think he was overwhelmed by ty/n crying he cares about her a lot I can tell
millie: I think they'd be a cute couple
will: me to, if I tell you something you can't tell anyone
Millie: cross my heart and hope to die
will: okay I trust you
Millie: good, now please explain
will: okay y/n and Louis kissed when we left the games room but you didn't hear that and you didn't hear that from me
Millie: omg yay really I'm so happy for them, but I don't know anything
will: me to just hope they won't break each other's hearts
Millie: let's hope

Y/N'S POV:

(during millies POV is when you and Louis got the ice cream)
y/n:  hey Louis, the Doritos and Pringles what flavour do you want
Louis: umm chile heatwave Doritos please and you decide on the Pringles
y/n: okay let's definitely get bbq and what would you prefer sour cream or salt and vinegar
Louis: ummm just go salt and vinegar
y/n: okay

you put the crisps in the trolly along with the ice cream, you noticed how sad Louis looked

y/n: hey Louis, you okay
Louis: yeh it's fine I'm fine

you knew he wasn't fine

y/n: you can tell me
Louis: you were crying and you were hurt and I don't know I didn't do anything about it

water fills up in his eyes

y/n: yes but I'm fine now
Louis: good but I was so worried about you, you looked so broken and I don't do anything and I don't even know i let you down I let everyone down

you pull him into the tightest hug you head was buried below his shoulder and his head was rested on top of yours

y/n: you didn't let me down Louis and how was you meant to know if I didn't tell you and I'm sorry if I don't tell me I didn't want you to treat me differently
Louis: what do you mean treat me differently

you both pull away from the hug

y/n: I told you'd one thing without telling you the full truth
Louis: what was it
y/n: when I was crying that time I was crying because I missed my parents and hadn't seen them in a long time that was true but what I didn't say is that they died and today is there death date
Louis: oh y/n I'm so sorry

he pulls you into another tight hug you wanted to cry but you stayed strong for him and for them

y/n: it's okay
Louis: if you don't mind me asking, how long ago was it
y/n: well I'm 16 now and Tom is 24 now so today is 6years I was 10 and Tom was 18, and I honestly don't mind answering questions it's nice to talk about them very once and a while
Louis: aww bless you only 10, how did it happen
y/n: a car accident, lucky tom and I wasn't in
Louis: I'm so sorry and I'm always here for you if you want to talk about anything
y/n: thank you so much

you both pull out of the hug

Louis: come on let's go find Millie and will

author of the book:
(I'm sorry if there is any spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes throughout the whole book it's 2:00am)
I'm seeing some people taking a break from writing Louis story's because of the whole fox eye trend, personally I won't stop writing because I enjoy it a lot and I like give you guys new chapters to read, and I don't think Louis and his friend( sorry I forgot her name) did it intentionally she has addressed to situation saying they were just pretending to be
e-boys. but anyway THANK YOU ON 200 READS I'm so grateful for all of you who is reading this (I am coming out with another Louis partridge story) but I won't stop this one as well I will be doing both so get ready for that and please keep reading, voting, commenting, following it means the world to me thank you have have a good day or night <3

 but anyway THANK YOU ON 200 READS I'm so grateful for all of you who is reading this (I am coming out with another Louis partridge story) but I won't stop this one as well I will be doing both so get ready for that and please keep reading, voting...

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