My Mystery Man
Ariana is a normal 17 year old girl who is shy and nervous when it comes to guys. Until she begins to hear his voice and when she finally meets him she instantly falls in love with him. Will she be able to break out of her shell and open her heart to him or is she destined for heartbreak and sadness.
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PutDownMyCupcakes
Ooh mysterious :O I bet she isn't as ugly as other cow-like girls are claiming -_- poor thing!!! Is she that miserable? :L <3 voted
quite spooky with the little whisper, I like it :) Maybe you should use the rule, new speaker new line? It makes it clear who's speaking :)
Upload more soon. U are a really good writer and I thought I should let you know that
There are few grammar mistakes here and there but so far it's good and sounds interesting :)
You have some grammar mistakes, but it looks like Wicked pointed them out already, so just fix those up. Keep it up. owob
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