Love Hurts.
Sarah thought she had everything figured it out, just got the perfect boyfriend, she was in her last year at sixth form before going off to university, then she discovered Connor - her new boyfriend - did go to her school, but he wasn't a student... Can they get through this battle or will it just pull them more apart...
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xDontPanicx
There's a lot of dialogue and your dialogue isn't bad but i think you should add in a bit more description. Good start though :)
This is a great first story! I think it's good even though I wouldn't usually read this kind of book. Voted though :)
It's so cute!! I love how all her friends are teasing her, saying she has a boyfriend! We all have friends like that!
You have a really great writing style. It flows together and is really descriptive. It's also a very capturing start. So far I really like your story (:
I like that you barely have grammar mistakes and great way to start a story :D Voted !
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| Name | Melissa |
| Location | Yorkshire, England |
| Birthday | Mar 08 |
| Member Since | Apr 15, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 368 |
