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Teen Fiction: What Happens In High school

Hey!! Here's a new one for you:)

Title: What Happens In High school

Description: Katy Richardson a regular teenage girl who seems to get along with all her friends except a boy who she always has problems with in high school. After years of fight , they fall for each other. Will they be able to admit their feelings to each other?Or will they be afraid of ruining their relationship, after being friends?You'll never know if you don't find out

Author: Smile_Lara

GRADE: B-

So just finished reading the first few chapters and I have quite alot to say, so I' going to divide it:

High Points:

-The description of your story was brilliant!! You had me aching to find out all about it!

-I thought plot would be cliche, and though some parts of it are, it's not really THAT cliche overall, so good job!

-I like your characters. They're very distinct and distinguishable, meaning each character has an original personality.

-It's attracting.

Low Points:

-It was lacking ALOT of description. Work on describing the setting more!! And add more emotion:)

-It moved along too fast in the beginning, but you slowed it down later on, so keep that up. Readers like it when the story moves nice and slow. You need to let it develop!

-Lowest point: Grammar. You have a myriad of grammar mistakes! Though the grammar got better as I read along, it was really faulted in the beginning, and that'll make you lose alot of your readers...I STRONGLY suggest getting an editor to help you with the story!:) ALTHOUGH, considering English isn't your first language, kudos on trying:D

I hope I helped you, and I hope you take my advice!! Good Luck!

INTERVIEW:

1) How long have you been writing?

Smile_Lara: I started writing about 2 months ago.

2) Why should your story be read?

Smile_Lara: Well, I feel like it would be an interesting story for people who are new to wattpad. It's something people may experience in their daily life.Part of it is from my experience.It's not that cliché, so many people may find it interesting!

3) What inspired you to write your story?

Smile_Lara: My experiences inspired me!Plus,there were many love stories I read , so I thought I could give it a try!But the major reason I wrote this is because of a boy !I guess people have that influence on you.

4) Whay do you hope your reader get out of your writing?

Smile_Lara: I hope that whoever is reading my story gets prepared fr the worst things that could happen.You may never know!This things could happen in real life, can't they?You may experience this yourself too and I want them to know that its never wrong if you love someone that you may have hated all your life!Strange things can happen, people can change and you can find that out yourself.. I hope they learn that from my story.:)

That's it! Hope I helped.

'What Happens In High school' by Smile_Lara

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Till next time

-Ty