Superman stole my panties by kissmyoops3

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This one won a watty award so I wanted to read it.

 It was actually not my cup of tea. There were many times I was going to quit on the story but kept going, I didn’t like Donavan I thought he was a bit perverted. Things were never really explained like how he got to be superman, who made his costume, where were his parents, where did his money come from. Then he became a high school drop out. All he talked about was how he liked Avery in her green underwear. 

It had a weak story line, there was no reason why he was superman or why he kept showing up in Averys bedroom. I don’t know, I just couldn’t get into it..sorry

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