Title: Chasing Trinity
Author: MeNoHearYou
Genre: Mystery/Suspense & Teen Fiction
Originality: 8/10
The theme you use - self-discovery and romance - is overused. But that doesn't change the fact that you linked in bad luck with it. I like the idea and I think that your story holds a lot of potiental.
Spelling, Grammar, and Flow: 10/10
Maybe you don't have perfect of any of the following, but you have convinced me enough that the story is well enough to deserve a perfect ten for grammar, spelling, and flow.
Characters: 8/10
Trinity seems like a really nice girl that has strength. Although I think that she needs a bit more personality, I like the way she talks about her bad luck. You took your time with your characters which I appreciate.
Other than that, I don't really have too much to say.
Description: 9/10
Two words: AMA. ZING!
Plot: 9/10
At this point, I am astounded with your writing. You are amazing and I have nothing to critique, hence the reason why this is so short.
Grand Total: 46/50
