The Aster Awards 2023 [CLOSED]

: ̗̀➛ POETRY SECTION

1. Shadows of Us by footnoteofhappiness

Cover/Title:  8/10
The flow of words - 13/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 14/15
Writing style- 13 /15
Poetic devices- 11/15
Emotions- 9/10
Originality- 9 /10
Enjoyment- 9/10
Total: 86 /100

Review: I appreciate your writing style, what I felt is there was no use of punctuations so it could have been more attractive if you would have used them. Rest of all is amazing.. All the best.

2. The Boy who plays with Doves by WinterlyHeights

Cover/Title:  8/10
The flow of words - 14/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary- 15/15
Writing style- 13 /15
Poetic devices- 13/15
Emotions- 10 /10
Originality- 10 /10
Enjoyment- 9/10
Total:  92/100

Review: I really am impressed by your high level imagination. But I think if you had to continue in the flow of the chapters then you could have splitted it in the parts of three three so that reader don't get bored thinking its again left so long. And coming to the cover I think it could have been more attractive. Otherwise, I loved everything about the poem. All the best and keep it up.

3. As Calm as the Storm by girlofmanythoughts

Cover/Title: 9/10
The flow of words - 12/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary-  12/15
Writing style- 12/15
Poetic devices- 10/15
Emotions- 8/10
Originality- 8/10
Enjoyment- 8/10
Total:  79/100

Review: I appreciate your writing so much. I think you should add some punctuations to separate the lines and para where you want to. Rest of all was amazing. All the best.

4. My Heart, My Sanctuary by Aravis-Brightspell

Cover/Title: 10/10
The flow of words - 15/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary-  14/15
Writing style- 14/15
Poetic devices- 14/15
Emotions- 9/10
Originality- 9/10
Enjoyment- 9/10
Total:  94/100

Review: I couldn't stop myself from reading your further poems. Like it was great joy reading them and after reading them all just one comment "YOU ARE INCREDIBLE POETESS".. All the best.

5. Constellation by Ardra06

Cover/Title: 9/10
The flow of words - 14/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary-  14/15
Writing style- 14/15
Poetic devices- 14/15
Emotions- 10/10
Originality- 9/10
Enjoyment- 9/10
Total:  93/100

Review: I reallyyy appreciate your writings.. The depth you had in yur sentences is amazing. All the best.

6. Those Unsaid Words by wild_imaginator16

Cover/Title: 9/10
The flow of words - 15/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary-  15/15
Writing style- 15/15
Poetic devices- 14/15
Emotions- 10/10
Originality- 10/10
Enjoyment- 10/10
Total: 98 /100

Review: I have fallen for your writings... You really gave me shivers with your poems, like they are so deep and amazing to get lost in. Just a thing Lies is that the cover title is common with many books, so if you look to change it, it would be more attractive... All the best.

7. His Perfume by JankyFluffy

Cover/Title: 8/10
The flow of words - 12/15
Grammar/Spelling/Vocabulary-  13/15
Writing style- 13/15
Poetic devices- 11/15
Emotions- 8/10
Originality- 8/10
Enjoyment- 7/10
Total:  80/100

Review: I really appreciate your writing...  I think if you could add some punctuations in the flow of lines, it would look more attractive for people to read it. Rest of all is good. All the best.