Title: Dream Team
Author: pinkybrownmr
Plot: (1)/10
(Original; 9-10 Points)
(A Little Used; 7-8 Points)
(Seen it a Few Times Before; 5-6 Points)
(Getting Too Used; 3-4 Points)
(Tiresome; 0-2 Points)
There was nothing creative about this plot line. Nothing.
Grammar: (1)/5
(0-3 Mistakes; 4-5 Points)
(4-6 Mistakes; 3-4 Points)
(7-10 Mistakes; 2-3 Points)
(10+ Mistakes; 0-2 Points)
Grammatical errors is based on how long the novel is
I saw so many grammatical mistakes in this novel it was insane. My main issue was in the dialogue there wouldn't be a period after the last word when the spoken sentence was at the end of the actual sentence it was placed in. There was also a lot of spelling errors in this book that drove me nuts. I understand if there are like two or three because sometimes I have those in my books without knowing, but this had them in almost every sentence. It drove me crazy!
Characters: (0)/15
(Well Developed; 12-15 Points)
(Developed; 8-11 Points)
(Understood; 5-7 Points)
(Difficult to Understand; 3-4 Points)
(Confusing; 0-2 Points)
There was nothing special about the characters in this book. They all had parents who told them they could go to this school to dance. We never learned anything special about each girl.
Layout: (0)/5
(Perfect; 5 Points)
(Good; 4 Points)
(Understood; 3 Points)
(Difficult to Understand; 2 Points)
(Confusing; 0-1 Points)
Layout in terms of correct paragraphs, dialogue, etc.
If I have to say this again... If you are introducing a new idea or a different character is speaking, please start a new paragraph! It becomes extremely difficult to read when someone doesn't abide by this rule and makes the book seem very amateur.
Descriptions: (1)/15 Points
(Extremely Well Described; 14-15 Points)
(Well Described; 11-13 Points)
(Understandable; 7-10 Points)
(Difficult to Imagine; 4-6 Points)
(Confusing; 0-3 Points)
Descriptions of Scenes
There were little to none descriptions in this book. I got so bored reading it because there was not one scene I could recreate in my head.
Likability: (0)/5
(Dying to Read More; 5 Points)
(Wanting to Read More; 4 Points)
(Not On My Mind 24/7; 3 Points)
(Not My Favorite; 2 Points)
(Can't Read It; 0-1 Points)
I literally could not read this book. That is all I have to say.
Does This Book Have A Future: (0)/5
(Most Definitaly; 5 Points)
(I Think So; 4 Points)
(One Hit Wonder; 3 Points)
(I'm not Sure; 2 Points)
(No; 0-1 Points)
Comments: This book was painful to read, needless to say. I definitely did not finish because all of the grammatical errors drive me crazy. If you wish to better entertain the reader, please add specific details to each girl because of they did not have different names, there would basically be all these girls with nothing different about each of them.
Total: (3)/60
Please note: I know this is harsh but I am being honest. If you ask to have your book reviewed please know you may bet this kind of review.
