Authors note

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  • Dedicated to My Friends
                                    

Hey everyone! First off I would like to thank all of you for taking the time to open my story. With that being said, I'd like to take a moment more of your time to explain that this writing is filled with inaccuracies, grammar mistakes, and immature writing choices. I wrote this when I was 11 and wrote purely for the joy of writing, I had no desire to make things accurate. All I wanted was for other people to read what I wanted to write. So I am very much aware of any dumb decisions my characters make, but I have no plans to ever revise this story. I'm in a very different part of my life and am focused on school and my own riding rather than fixing a story from years ago. I have since grown much in my knowledge of horses and have traveled across the country to compete in national horse knowledge competitions. Please excuse 11 year old me for not knowing nearly as much as I do now. I hope you all enjoy this fictional writing, I know that I very much enjoyed writing it.

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Here is a list of the characters so you can have an idea what they look like! I am adding them as they appear so this is not all if the characters! :)

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Asha: Dark brown long hair hazel eyes
Riding: All disciplines Main focus dressage and jumping

Zara: Dirty blond long hair green eyes
Riding: All disciplines Main focus Dressage and jumping

Amy: Dirty blond short hair blue eyes
Riding: All disciplines Main focuses Dressage Jumping and Driving

Andrea: (Asha's mom) Dark brown long hair blue eyes
Riding: Doesn't ride anymore due to past experiences

Jacob: Brown hair blue eyes
Riding: Stable hand

Zœ: Short dark brown hair brown eyes
Rides: All English Dressage and jumping disciplines Main focus: TDE (three day eventing)

Audrey: Long blond hair hazel eyes
Rides: Dressage Main Focus: Dressage

Brittany: Long brown hair brown eyes
Rides:Jumping and Dressage
Main Focus:Jumping

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*A Perfect Dawn (Dawn)
11 Mare Dark Bay arabian (top picture)
Asha's horse

Reach For The Sky (Sky)
6 Mare White w/ black spots POA
Asha's horse

*Liberty (Jet)
20? Gelding Bay pony breed unknown
Zara's horse

Jump For Joi (Joi)
7 Mare Bay horse thoroughbred
Zœ's horse

*Red Hot Pepper (Pepper)
11 Gelding Palomino Welsh Mountain pony
Zœ's horse

Lightening Flash (Flash)
5 Gelding Chestnut thoroughbred
Horse Asha trains

Black Diamond (Onyx)
5 Mare White and brown pinto throughbred
Asha's training project

Hot Shot (Gunner)
5 Gelding Dark Dappled thoroughbred
Asha's training project

Golden Star (Gold)
5 Gelding thoroughbred (I don't know how to describe him so I will post a pic later)
Asha's training project

*Cheerio
10 Gelding Breed unknown
Last Chance's

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Pepper mint
1 Female golden retriever mix
Asha's puppy

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