Tuala23

Am finally adding more to the story, will upload it tonight or tomorrow at the latest- Thanks for reading guys :)

Hey its me again. umm could you review some of my latest updates? I understand the short sentences but I would like to now about anything else?

Hey guys, just wondering if you all like the new parts (part 15 and 16) let me know what you think:)

@chairsniffa Thanks heaps for reading my story and commenting! its great to hear good feedback and I really appreciate it:)

Gday neighbour across the ditch (Tasman Sea) my dad is a maori but I'm born and bred here in aussie! Will check it out now!

@XXBlackAngelXX 
          read your story anf commented. could you read and comment mine please:)
          http://www.wattpad.com/887534-a-secret-to-hide

@SilverLady
          
          Hey sure I will read your story. Would love it if you read mine, comment and let me know what you think:)
           http://www.wattpad.com/887534-a-secret-to-hide

Heey there. Can I just say YOU'RE AWESOME >:D! Thank you so very super much for faning, love ya loads. In return, I shall check out your story What if god was one of us" Sounds super mysterious, can't wait <3 

CAn you read my story? uf u comment i will return the favor

Could you all please read the start of my story called 'what if god was one of us' please! tell me what you think