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destined to be dead

destined to be dead

273 Reads 4 Votes 1 Part Story
Alex By katthorn Completed

This is about a girl who kills demons and isn't happy in life that gets turned into a vampire

IbeKen IbeKen Jan 27, 2011
I loved the second page :D
                              I really did, The only thing that still bugs me are the "..." 's (:
                              Im sorry if i critigued to hard, its kinda my thing. Also please excuse my typing, its 6 am here :P
IbeKen IbeKen Jan 27, 2011
Mmm. and also, "eery" should have been "eerie" 
                              "I say "who are you?" could have been, " "Who are you?" I whisper."
                              okay noooowww onto the next page(: