This is about a girl who kills demons and isn't happy in life that gets turned into a vampire
I loved the second page :D
I really did, The only thing that still bugs me are the "..." 's (:
Im sorry if i critigued to hard, its kinda my thing. Also please excuse my typing, its 6 am here :P
Mmm. and also, "eery" should have been "eerie"
"I say "who are you?" could have been, " "Who are you?" I whisper."
okay noooowww onto the next page(: