New Wolfe

New Wolfe

11.9K Reads 236 Votes 15 Part Story
Kellie By redhead_book_worm Updated Mar 24, 2013

Raya's 17th birthday is a week away and she can't wait to gain her freedom, but she's unknowingly getting much more than she bargained for. Orphaned as a baby, she's ever known her parents, all she's ever known is the group foster home she's lived in all her life. Things start to change when she sees a wolf in the woods one night. With the arrival of Michal she learns that she's not entirely human and that she's apart of something bigger than just herself. Unknown dangers lurk around every corner, waiting and watching for their chance. Raya must face and overcome these dangers just to stay alive and keep the love of her life. Her soulmate.

redhead_book_worm redhead_book_worm Mar 24, 2013
@GigglySweetles I've been working on the next chapter. I'm hoping this one won't take a month to write but I have scenes for other stories popping up in my dang head.
redhead_book_worm redhead_book_worm Apr 27, 2012
@awesome4evah Thank you! Right now I'm trying to write more. I plan to go back and really edit later
JJJiangx JJJiangx Apr 27, 2012
This is a good start.
                              I think a bit more detail would be nice, but that's just my opinion.
                              I love the name Raya! You have good characters and while the flow's a bit choppy, it's good.
                              Voted :)
redhead_book_worm redhead_book_worm Mar 15, 2012
@StoryGirl5169 Thanks. I'm working on the editing.
                              
                              @forevergreen It's cool. thanks for your time :)
forevergreen forevergreen Mar 12, 2012
I think you should add a little bit more detail, but it was good that you got straight to the point of your chapter :) 
                              I'm really sorry about my late comment :S
aSecretStory aSecretStory Mar 08, 2012
You need to  add more details but other than that this story is really good. I didn't spot many mistakes. Well done.