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The Keeper of the Key I - The Golden Dragon

The Keeper of the Key I - The Golden Dragon

4.7K Reads 88 Votes 11 Part Story
Melissa By Kugelmonkey Completed

Ever since her mother had died, Zara had been punished relentlessly by her father. After he sends her to a boarding school, she meets an old friend, Kieran, and makes some new ones. When Zara is dared to steal the principal’s most prized possession, does she get away with it? Zara makes a journey half way around the world, and even into other worlds. Prepare to be blown away by the thrilling first instalment of The Keeper of the Key series.

Kugelmonkey Kugelmonkey Feb 05, 2011
@equinelover909 Completely agree. I wrote this chapter over two year ago now, and I've worked out most of the flaws. But thank youu for your feedback, I appreciate it a ton! :DD
Kugelmonkey Kugelmonkey Feb 01, 2011
@Scorpious Thank you so much! ^-^ I came home to all these comments, and they made me smile. :DD Thank youuu!
Scorpious Scorpious Feb 01, 2011
I really liked the story so far. And to be frank, there was only ONE mistake in the whole chapter. On to chapter 2 I go!!
Kugelmonkey Kugelmonkey Jan 27, 2011
@falling4ever4him Thank you very much for reading, and for your lovely comments. I really appreciate it. :D
Kugelmonkey Kugelmonkey Jan 24, 2011
@XopetaoX (: Okay, thanks for the suggestion, and thanks so much for reading!
thecoffeekid thecoffeekid Jan 23, 2011
                              Sorry to disturb you ( I probably sound annoying) Can you please please check out my story called His lies comfort me, when you get the chance.
                              thnx soo much
                              xxxx naomi