This is the End

This is the End

1.2K Reads 9 Votes 8 Part Story
Zac Barger By ZacBarger Completed

The United States was changed forever when a group known as the Macabre Army came forward, killed all the students and teachers at three high schools and then bombed the Washington, D.C. metropolitan area. 
Four months later, the M.A. hasn't been active for over a month. In celebration, Trey Davis's high school is holding a carnival.
But when the Macabre Army shows up, all hell breaks loose for Trey and his friends.

markschmoyer markschmoyer Apr 29, 2011
Pretty interesting! You kinda jumped into the story VERY quickly which isn't bad, but maybe a LITTLE bit more of a background.
markschmoyer markschmoyer Apr 29, 2011
Pretty interesting! You kinda jumped into the story VERY quickly which isn't bad, but maybe a LITTLE bit more of a background.
markschmoyer markschmoyer Apr 29, 2011
Pretty interesting! You kinda jumped into the story VERY quickly which isn't bad, but maybe a LITTLE bit more of a background.
ZacBarger ZacBarger Mar 01, 2011
 Thank you ma'am. Yeah, I'm in school, so it's a fear for me too.
evykas70 evykas70 Mar 01, 2011
Gosh! That is my biggest fear, since I have kids in school! Very real sounding!!
Bookguru Bookguru Jan 17, 2011
This is from my post "if you want me to read your story, click here"...
                              There were a few mistakes, but luckily that is an easy fix!!!!!!!! I suggest an editor for your story, but overall it was fascinating.
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