One Of Many //Being Rewritten//

One Of Many //Being Rewritten//

15K Reads 36 Votes 3 Part Story
Tallulah By TallulahHoney Updated Oct 16, 2017

//THIS STORY IS BEING REWRITTEN!//

Was previously known as: 

Meliodas' Sister - The Eighth Sin
And 
The Demonic Sister

Meliodas and Jude have always been close. Closer than the others. But when Meliodas' suddenly sets out for the Mortal realm his brother is heart broken. 

A few years later he sets out for his sibling. Not realising how big the Mortal world was. How can he cope? 

[I DO NOT OWN SEVEN DEADLY SINS OR ANY OF THE CHARACTERS APART FROM MY OC!!!]

  • ban
  • brother
  • demons
  • diane
  • gowther
  • king
  • meliodas
  • sevendeadlysins
  • yaoi
Wolfs_Sin_Of_Love Wolfs_Sin_Of_Love May 29, 2017
But WAIT!!!  doesn't the tavern belong to meliodas so THEY SHOULD BE THE ONES LEAVING!!!!!
MeowFries MeowFries Sep 04, 2017
Just some friendly criticism as a fellow writer: you might want to edit this and correct some spelling and grammar errors, so it's easier for your readers to understand. But great job so far, I'm already laughing
MeowFries MeowFries Oct 11, 2017
I think you should edit this a little and make it a little easier to understand, but otherwise I think it's great!