The Demonic Sister

The Demonic Sister

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Tallulah By TallulahHoney Updated Apr 05

Was previously known as: 

Meliodas' Sister - The Eighth Sin

Kaiya and Meliodas are half demon twins and have been inseparable since birth, until Meliodas leaves to the human world, and doesn't return, so Kaiya goes after him.
After stumbling into each other, they reunite, what will they think after a thousand years of being apart?

[I DO NOT OWN SEVEN DEADLY SINS OR ANY OF THE CHARACTERS APART FROM MY OC!!!]

MeowFries MeowFries Sep 04
Just some friendly criticism as a fellow writer: you might want to edit this and correct some spelling and grammar errors, so it's easier for your readers to understand. But great job so far, I'm already laughing
MeowFries MeowFries Sep 04
I hate it when brothers jump through a portal, and a thousand years later he doesn't return. Also, don't demons only typically live for a thousand years? So she should be like really old by now.