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The runaways ( SLOW Updates )

The runaways ( SLOW Updates )

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RubyBrine By Brine_Twins Updated 2 days ago

Jess Aphmau phenoix, she was diffrent. not just diffrent,  Unique. She had Just ran from a village agin when she suddenly met him, only to then meet, Them. They join forces and do......  *The rest of the page was overwritten with the phrase* Die by Death*

Sorry but different Phoenix and again really sorry I just can't stand it I am a book geek 📚 🤓
Harunolary Harunolary Dec 28, 2016
I love. the introduction .. and you kind of put a little mystery in my head when I read it and there were guards chasing her something she was already used to...made me wonder what she was running from and why they.  were after her.
                              Also some errors but its a great story. love it so far.
rachelb101 rachelb101 Dec 28, 2016
This is a great start to your book. Having a cliffhanger on the first chapter is a great way of intriguing the audience. I am interested to know what the 'dark form' is.
lhurvely_girl lhurvely_girl Dec 28, 2016
I love the plot line. There are a few errors a little editing will do the trick. Cliffhangers are way too cool!! Great first chapter! Did you just say dark form??? Can't wait to read on
Brine_Twins Brine_Twins Dec 28, 2016
Thank you. I am not a good editor but I do plan to e,sit the story soon.
I don't even want to correct prepear to prepare I actually like this spelling better 😂