First Shot

First Shot

3.5K Reads 564 Votes 20 Part Story
Naz❤ By NayshaNaman Updated 2 days ago

My first shot at expressing through words. Will contain mainly poetry but I may insert one or two of my drawings here and there ;)

Minnie_xX- Minnie_xX- May 07
That moment you realise that its like its from Allah's side and you go back to the first few lines and just howwww aptly it suits! Ahhhhhh WHAT BEAUTY😭❤❤❤❤💯
AimanKadri AimanKadri Aug 24, 2016
WHEN THE HECK DID YOU DO THAT!????😳😭😭MY HEART!! YOU NEED TO GO SLOW ON ME!I WANT TO CRY FOR ALL OF IT,WHAT YOU DID!!!😭😭❤❤❤❤
vorafaiza vorafaiza Sep 07, 2016
This last pasrt is just soo... MashAllah can't even explain!😍😍❤
edanmorez edanmorez Aug 30, 2016
From the first paragraph, I could tell that this was from the perspective of a powerful being. Good job.
hershey-z hershey-z Aug 27, 2016
Oh God, the message is so deep and I didn't get one thing, that speaks for your writing! It's so intriguing heuuehe
ItsMaania ItsMaania Sep 02, 2016
Write 21 as twenty-one so one can SEE the rhyme as well as feel it.
                              
                              Absolutely love the ending. It's sad yet a mixture of relief and.... Something I can't quite put my finger on. Like, happy that she has finally realised.