First Shot

First Shot

2.7K Reads 407 Votes 15 Part Story
Naz❤ By NayshaNaman Updated Dec 10, 2016

My first shot at expressing through words. Will contain mainly poetry but I may insert one or two of my drawings here and there ;)

peanutbutter_choc peanutbutter_choc Aug 19, 2016
What happened to 'from tomorrow I'm not going to go on any of my apps until exams end' hmm?! 😏
AimanKadri AimanKadri Aug 24, 2016
WHEN THE HECK DID YOU DO THAT!????😳😭😭MY HEART!! YOU NEED TO GO SLOW ON ME!I WANT TO CRY FOR ALL OF IT,WHAT YOU DID!!!😭😭❤❤❤❤
vorafaiza vorafaiza Sep 07, 2016
This last pasrt is just soo... MashAllah can't even explain!😍😍❤
edanmorez edanmorez Aug 30, 2016
From the first paragraph, I could tell that this was from the perspective of a powerful being. Good job.
hershey-z hershey-z Aug 27, 2016
Oh God, the message is so deep and I didn't get one thing, that speaks for your writing! It's so intriguing heuuehe
ItsMaania ItsMaania Sep 02, 2016
Write 21 as twenty-one so one can SEE the rhyme as well as feel it.
                              
                              Absolutely love the ending. It's sad yet a mixture of relief and.... Something I can't quite put my finger on. Like, happy that she has finally realised.