The fantasy novel I wrote before Prince of Thorns. I'm updating it (very slightly) and posting it here chapter by chapter.
It's 15 years old now! But I had a good time writing it and I think it's a fun read.
Finished Wheel Of Osheim a few days ago, it was a great read. Must say this looks to be heading the same way
Was this the only other full-length novel you completed before Prince of Thorns, or are there others that might get posted on here as well?
Nicely set up start. Leaves a million questions but draws you in. Not sure on the name of the character , maybe something with a J.
Descriptions are very well drawn , I'd like to see more of the internal monologue of Ingold, trying to keep himself in line
Extra "the" or missing y. (And _the_ leaned one to the next)
Your writting, along with the likes of Patrick Rothfuss, just has a way of rolling off the tounge. So to speak. Its so easy to read yet engaging. Please do not stop writting!
And if you have any pointers on how it is that you plan your telling of a story. I would love to learn how you do it!
Very enjoyable and thorough setting of the story, the descriptions are fantastic and it's easy to immerse in the world of this book. I cannot wait for the next installments, but so far - a very promising start!