Remember Me Always

Remember Me Always

42 Reads 7 Votes 2 Part Story
striggity strider By I_ThinkTooMuch_ Updated Jul 29, 2016

Johanna was having some difficulties with her gender identity. She was finally discovering herself, until her mother passed. She found comfort in music after that. Music was her life. And then Chris came along,   the amazing musician who just might have stolen Jo's heart. But alas, good things never last. They shared jokes, music, and tears, but can Chris stand to tell Johanna her secret without breaking her heart again?

  • adorable
  • cute
  • lgbt
  • original
  • sad
  • tearjerker
  • tearjerking
  • thiswillmakeyoucry
  • trans
angelicdevil09 angelicdevil09 Jul 01, 2016
I love the story idea. But I would recommend editing tbe first chapter to include the rest od the flashback instead of cutting off in the middle. 
                              
                              Your grammar is fine though your sentence structuring needs a bit of work. Though the story does have a lot of potential. :)