Answers For Ezra

Answers For Ezra

163 Reads 3 Votes 3 Part Story
Dasani43 By Dasani43 Updated Sep 08, 2012

Can a humble young girl whose flaws are all rooted from accepting the life she's given, no matter the circumstances, deserve daily abuse? Can a mother who allows such destructive events to happen right in front of her eyes, every day that they open, do nothing at all and still love her child?  Does she even love herself if she takes blows as well without the slightest sign of defense? How did this happen? When did it start? Is my existence to blame?  Will I even live long enough to survive this nightmare? Will I ever find someone who truly cares? Is this my destiny? Do I deserve something more? Does this terrible life of mine last forever? Or will I conquer this angry monster in this house I was forced to call home? Will I, Ezra Ballard, ever be happy again? There's only one way to find out. Play these cards I've been dealt. Time to face fate.

  • friendship
  • humor
  • love
  • sad
GemmaLeighNurdin GemmaLeighNurdin Nov 19, 2011
Hey! This is a really good start to the story, your a very good writer :) xxx
Dasani43 Dasani43 Nov 19, 2011
@hastiheartsyou Oh.! Those seem to slip my mind quite a bit. I'll be sure to use spell check in the future lol
Slim_Shady Slim_Shady Nov 19, 2011
@Dasani43 
                              Honestly it's not biggie, just make sure that all of your I's are capitals :)
Dasani43 Dasani43 Nov 19, 2011
@hastiheartsyou Thanks..!  I plan to make it more upbeat.. but i will try my best with the punctuation lol. How did I screw it up?
JustCeline JustCeline Nov 19, 2011
Wow! This was such an amazing start! Your writing is soooo good. You need to post more. This is such an amazing start!
Slim_Shady Slim_Shady Nov 19, 2011
Good start, the story is really sad though! But it was good :)
                              Also, be careful of your punctuation!
                              Keep going! :) x