Awake (#Onceuponnow)

Awake (#Onceuponnow)

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Jesse Sprague By JesseSprague Completed

*One of 10 winners in the @target OnceUponNow contest*
    After five years in a coma, Rose has given up on ever living her life again. It's pure torture hearing her husband's voice as he struggles to save her. All Rose wants is for Crane to be able to go on with his life and be happy.
    
    When a change in her condition drives Crane to extreme measures, Rose must decide what the value of a life is-- Hers & Crane's.
    
    Not all fairytales can end with a kiss.

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  • fantasy
  • fbi
  • femalelead
  • love
  • modernfairytale
  • onceuponnow
  • princess
  • romance
  • sciencefiction
  • scientist
  • scifi
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Rad intro!  I'm a sucker for the Fable stories so this is right up my alley.  It's been a while since I've been excited about a piece here on Wattpad; you're talented.
That was extremely detailed. I can already tell I'm going to like this
WriterAtHeart96 WriterAtHeart96 Jun 20, 2016
An amazing opening! Also the part where it talks about conducting energy without changing its form brought me back to my thermodynamics days at HU!
1979Cards 1979Cards Jan 05
Your words describing are very vivid, I love it. I feel as if I'm right there, feeling and seeing. Your a great storyteller!!
StoryofAshlyn StoryofAshlyn Jun 20, 2016
I've never read the POV of a narrator in a coma before (quite like this). The story promises to be sad, but the writing is so lovely.
lbrunet5 lbrunet5 Jun 20, 2016
Jesse thank you for the heads up on your new story.  Amazing chapter. Your stories always leave me wanting more and wondering what surprises you have in store!