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Awake (#Onceuponnow)

Awake (#Onceuponnow)

4.8K Reads 640 Votes 7 Part Story
Jesse Sprague By JesseSprague Completed

*One of 10 winners in the @target OnceUponNow contest*
    After five years in a coma, Rose has given up on ever living her life again. It's pure torture hearing her husband's voice as he struggles to save her. All Rose wants is for Crane to be able to go on with his life and be happy.
    
    When a change in her condition drives Crane to extreme measures, Rose must decide what the value of a life is-- Hers & Crane's.
    
    Not all fairytales can end with a kiss.

Rad intro!  I'm a sucker for the Fable stories so this is right up my alley.  It's been a while since I've been excited about a piece here on Wattpad; you're talented.
WriterAtHeart96 WriterAtHeart96 Jun 20, 2016
An amazing opening! Also the part where it talks about conducting energy without changing its form brought me back to my thermodynamics days at HU!
1979Cards 1979Cards Jan 05
Your words describing are very vivid, I love it. I feel as if I'm right there, feeling and seeing. Your a great storyteller!!
NoxPerpetuo NoxPerpetuo Jun 19, 2016
I didn't expect her to wake up, especially in part one of the story. What'll happen next, I wonder?
FinnyH FinnyH Jun 18, 2016
Nice! I expected her to wake up from a hospital bed, but I'm loving the sci-fi element even more. I almost forgot how much I love your writing.
TheGwen2903 TheGwen2903 Jun 19, 2016
Oooh, such a great story concept. And I really feel Rose's emotional total waves of trauma, haziness and memories.