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The Vicar's Daughters

The Vicar's Daughters

58.3K Reads 3.2K Votes 23 Part Story
Sarah Droegemueller By SarahBigD Completed

If every young lady likes to be crossed in love now and then, the Vicar Pearce's daughters are three times blessed. Willful and spirited, Rachel refuses to think Lord Ellsworth's son, her dearest friend since childhood, is not in love with her. But the youngest sister, Amanda, is the one who's attracted the eye of Lord Dabney with her honey-gold hair and angelic demeanor. Meanwhile, Marian is stuck in the middle with no one to love--unless that charming rogue Simeon counts. The ways of the heart do not unfold in a straightforward manner for the delightful sisters in this Regency period romance.

An interesting start! I liked the family dynamic and you've set your characters up in a clear and logical fashion. I look forward to reading more.
Lothlorien1 Lothlorien1 Sep 17, 2016
What on earth would a 12 year do in the navy?  What about his studies?
Pocahontas Pocahontas Sep 20, 2016
Pleasantly surprised to find my island mentioned!!! I'm a Trini :)
seriouslygina seriouslygina Mar 26, 2016
Sarah, this intro is kind of long and all the italics might throw an agent off. I'm not sure what kind of feed back you want, so I'll stay mute at this point unless you're wanting more :)
                              Continuing to read now. :)
LibMikie101 LibMikie101 Apr 02, 2016
This is well written,  and I laughed at how astute the vicar was regarding his daughters. I can't wait to see what other situations they find themselves in. Really charming opening!
Bateauivre Bateauivre Jul 29, 2016
The opening scene was fabulous! Great job! It really caught my attention... (if it's not a secret, did you get it right on the first try :)?