First Season

First Season

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susan_jackson31 By susan_jackson31 Completed

Lady Lavinia Bradley has now turned seventeen and is expected to act like a lady and attend her first season. Her two over-protective brothers do what they can to keep her out of danger but somehow it always manages to find her.
  
  Lord Caleb Alder is her brother's friend, a flirt and far too cocky for her liking, but when he helps her she cannot help but begin to like him. Will they ever be allowed together when her brothers find out?

johnsonmia16 johnsonmia16 3 days ago
This is like how I view myself exactly, like I'm average I guess not really pretty but every once in a while I can be but not normally😂
Just a quick comment, they arrived in a carriage but left riding on their horses?
heyhannahj heyhannahj Nov 21
Fun first chapter! I love how vivid their personalities are. :)
You have some fun on sentences makes it a little hard to read.
crazykate76 crazykate76 Oct 15
Very good. Can't wit to see what mischief Lavinia gets into.
heyhannahj heyhannahj Nov 21
This is such a fun chapter! I like hearing Caleb's perspective. My only complaint is that he's liked her since her dad's funeral, which was 5 years from this. She's 17 now, so she would have been 12 then. He's liked her since he was 12? That's a little creepy haha