Darkness Isn't  Dark...

Darkness Isn't Dark...

646 Reads 23 Votes 4 Part Story
Katie Brown By Passion4reading Updated Nov 28, 2010

When Amerie's sister is murdered. She falls apart. She can't cope. So she tries to commit suicide. Her attempts fail. And she's left in a world of horror, adventure and revenge for her sister, will she find the murderer, Only time will tell for this heroine.

rachloves2write rachloves2write Nov 22, 2010
Very short, but still very powerful and intense. I hope Amerie can make it through - physically and mentally. (btw, I love her name :)
rachloves2write rachloves2write Nov 22, 2010
Wow, great begining. I like the format. The shorter sentences created drama, as did your descriptions and word choices. Very dark. I'm quite interested to see where this will go. I'll be right back though, my brother is dragging me with him to Subway for food :P
xxitunes22 xxitunes22 Nov 16, 2010
veryy intense writerr..keep uploading
                              also could u read/comment/vote my story thnx
bellapotter_16 bellapotter_16 Nov 14, 2010
okay wow, 
                              im impressed, 
                              that was seriously amazing. 
                              a few spelling errors but who cares? 
                              i love the title very creative. 
                              You're a fantastic writer, cant wait for more!