Mind Freak

Mind Freak

29 Part Story 42.3K Reads 1.5K Votes
Jessica By catchingangels Completed

Aubrey is transferring from the comfort of her well-known Catholic school to a boarding school across the country because of a mishap with the school's "Popular Girl."  She thinks that being sent away, she's being punished for her actions, but that's not entirely the case. She notices that the students and faculty of Hillside Academy aren't like anyone else she's met before, and that they seem to possess strange powers. Maybe even as strange as hers, even though she refuses to admit it.
    As she settles in, she starts to see that people are going missing, and that's definitely not normal. Are her and her classmates in serious danger? Will she be able to overcome her fear of her powers and use them to protect herself and her friends?

catchingangels catchingangels Mar 16, 2013 04:17PM
@Rican4life Yes! I've started my new chapter but I haven't had much time to write lately, but I will update soon :)
catchingangels catchingangels Jul 30, 2012 09:49PM
@Fade_Away thank you thank you thank you! I really appreciate all this feedback! :)
AlexMcGilvery AlexMcGilvery Jul 02, 2012 01:56AM
I like that you dump us into the action. I wonder do you give a little too much away for a prologue, but you got me to click to the second page.  That means you get my second page award.
RabiaSadaat RabiaSadaat May 31, 2012 10:09PM
you hooked me into this immediately, my favourite/funniest part would be 'the gym exploded' lol, its really great plot and i didn't spot any mistakes, great job! Voted. :)
catchingangels catchingangels May 31, 2012 10:04PM
@ii4oo49 @KawiiLawliiPop thanks for the feedback! It means a ton to me :D
ii4oo49 ii4oo49 May 31, 2012 10:02PM
this is very intriguing! it's written very well and makes the reader want to know what's gonna happen next!