The Littlest one (Editing)

The Littlest one (Editing)

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brooke903675 By brooke903675 Updated Jun 26, 2016

Scarlett Adams is a 13 year old girl who has five older brothers. They are really overprotective of here. But they don't understand a girls life.

    Nonya232 Nonya232 Jul 29
    My phone has a finger print lock so my brother can't use my phone
    NerdyNinjaLife NerdyNinjaLife Apr 02, 2016
    Whenever someone is talking, you put " at the beginning and end. Try spacing things in paragraphs for a different topic, and I don't want to seem mean. That isn't my goal. It's just this story has to much potential, I just wanted to help you out a little bit