Scarlett Adams is a 13 year old girl who has five older brothers. They are really overprotective of here. But they don't understand a girls life.
Whenever someone is talking, you put " at the beginning and end. Try spacing things in paragraphs for a different topic, and I don't want to seem mean. That isn't my goal. It's just this story has to much potential, I just wanted to help you out a little bit