Long live (the time of their life's) ON HOLD

Long live (the time of their life's) ON HOLD

432 Reads 9 Votes 6 Part Story
Emma Williams By EmmaWilliams66 Updated Aug 29, 2011

Darcy and Chase have only just met. They don't really like each other. However one dare to jump through the waterfall in the park is going to change all that. Now they are in another world and you could say they had the time of their life's.

Neo200120018 Neo200120018 Aug 31, 2011
Was quiet short but good, no errors I noted. Not much to say due to length sorry
lovehopedream lovehopedream Aug 30, 2011
Nice start, a small short chapter though, seems interesting (: will read the next chappie first since it's too short for me to say anything yet :p