Love Letters

Love Letters

267 Reads 12 Votes 3 Part Story
Ella0098 By Ella0098 Updated Aug 29, 2011

Meet Eden. a normal, fun loving teenage girl who gets a letter that changes her life forever. an unknown love letter with a secret twist :)

Ella0098 Ella0098 Aug 29, 2011
@Ashlynne thanks but its just the beggining and theres more too come, the middle gets a lot of action :) and yeah i havent had time too proof read them yet!! will do tomnmorow thoiugh :) thanks a lot :)
Ashlynne Ashlynne Aug 29, 2011
Ok, so two things. 
                              First: whoever sent that letter is creepy (:
                              Second: nobody I know would tell their mom "don't be long." I think a "Be back soon," or a "Okay, love ya, bye," would be more appropriate, but that just my opinion.
Ashlynne Ashlynne Aug 29, 2011
It's pretty good, but there are some spots were I think you left out a word. You could use more description, and maybe more action.
Ella0098 Ella0098 Aug 29, 2011
@writteninthestars thanks :) will do :) im trying to write another chapter soon :)