M.S.A.L.S. [Mates, Soulmates, And Love Series]

M.S.A.L.S. [Mates, Soulmates, And Love Series]

829 Reads 5 Votes 4 Part Story
Nuzhat Rehman By Rose1618 Updated Oct 18, 2010

Have you ever imagined being born in an eviroment that knows all about the existance of paranormal beings such as; werewolves, vampires and many more? While all the most of the earth's  (human) population is unknown and totally curious to it. Well Ruby is your 'average human' born in a family full of assasins, can you guess what sort of assasins are they? 


Have you found the right guy for you? Someone that makes you forget the pain? Someone that just might be your soulmate? Someone your older brother has been assigned to track down and kill!!!


Wanna know more read and find out!!!

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xBelieverx xBelieverx Oct 15, 2010
i understand not wanting confused readers but i think that kind of stuff should all come out in your writing instead of simply telling us details like that. 
xBelieverx xBelieverx Oct 15, 2010
seems interesting but the paragraph thing is making it weird to read
Maccaroni Maccaroni Oct 14, 2010
You didn't have to explain those stuff at the start. And you could have just explained it in the story than an extra chapter to do that!
                              Madi xxx
Maccaroni Maccaroni Oct 14, 2010
Awesome, great into. Getting the character all ready and stuff it's great. What i would say though is make that make the paragraghs split abit because it's hard to read. Don't take out what you write just break it abit. Hurt my eyes reading it. 
                              Love it though!
                              Madi xxx