tired of this world ?....pull the trigger
all i can think of is the white dress of the pretty girl on the cover being spoiled...:(
@rmh391 awww thnxxx sooo much ^__^ ....means HECK LOT !!~ :)
Not many poems make me sad but, this one has evoked that very emotion, good imagery.
@SophieRDF oookies thnx for the suggestion X3 will delete em as soon as i get time...n sankyuuuu for readin too X3
I agree with Akea13. I think the end of a line generally implies a pause, anyway.
@MariaAbarai thnxys sista !!
@Akea13 well the commas were not there but then i thot that there shud be a pause bcoz every scenario is a different one and thnx sooo much for reading it and lovin it <3 darky very happy
@VanieZelet death is scary ....n thnx sho much <3<3<3