Trigger

Trigger

127 Reads 10 Votes 1 Part Story
Darky By Darkest-Core Completed

tired of this world ?....pull the trigger

  • death
  • depression
  • hopelessness
  • poem
  • scene
  • suicide
seasofme seasofme Jun 23, 2014
all i can think of is the white dress of the pretty girl on the cover being spoiled...:(
Darkest-Core Darkest-Core Sep 03, 2011
@rmh391 awww thnxxx sooo much ^__^ ....means HECK LOT !!~ :)
rmh391 rmh391 Sep 03, 2011
Not many poems make me sad but, this one has evoked that very emotion, good imagery.
Darkest-Core Darkest-Core Aug 28, 2011
@SophieRDF oookies thnx for the suggestion X3 will delete em as soon as i get time...n sankyuuuu for readin too X3
SophieRDF SophieRDF Aug 27, 2011
I agree with Akea13. I think the end of a line generally implies a pause, anyway.
Darkest-Core Darkest-Core Aug 27, 2011
@MariaAbarai thnxys sista !! 
                              @Akea13  well the commas were not there but then i thot that there shud be a pause bcoz every scenario is a different one and thnx sooo much for reading it and lovin it <3 darky very happy
                              @VanieZelet death is scary ....n thnx sho much <3<3<3