A Baker (Beauty and the Beast)

A Baker (Beauty and the Beast)

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Arabella By ARA8311A Completed

Belle is poor. 

Her father always seems to be working and her mother always has a loaf of bread in the oven to sell but they still don't know how they'll survive until the next week. With her sister's spending every penny that they have, she knows she needs to do something and fast.

Belle doesn't know it yet but one walk into town can change everything. Especially when that walk involves a handsome stranger. 

Why don't the sisters just pass their dress down to each other and have the oldest get a new dress?
badragongirl13 badragongirl13 Jun 20, 2016
Okay, great. This paragraph and the one before it can be merged together into one paragraph. Also keep in mind that when writing, you never use the same word to begin a sentence more than three times without rest.
ScarletDrozd ScarletDrozd Dec 04, 2016
Should be "was" you can't switch tenses, it doesn't agree with "wanted" or "didn't" :)
badragongirl13 badragongirl13 Jun 20, 2016
Here's an example paragraph:
                              Belle loved the outdoors. The wind that would run through her hair nd the sound of the wildlife all around. She delighted with running through the wildflowers without any coverings on her feet. 
                              An you already said the last sentence before
Excellent start to the book, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I look forward to the rest! :)
Preach, sister - one of my favorite things in the world is taking a book to the park  ^_^