One Piece-Beautiful Mysterious (Trafalgar X OC Fanfic )

One Piece-Beautiful Mysterious (Trafalgar X OC Fanfic )

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One_Piece4Life By One_Piece4Life Completed

Name: Kauro D. Yukira
Age: 21
Family: None ( they left her)
Ability: Telekinesis, Teleportation 
Personality: Kind, Powerful,Uncontrollable, Oblivious and Overprotective 
Bounty: 500 000 000 bellies 
Bounty Name: Beautifully Mysterious Kauro
Appearance: Has shoulder length red orange hair, dark violet eyes when normal, but qhen angry, it turns blood red, pale skin, haves some curves but flat chested. Height is 5'9.
Clothes: Long sleeved hoody (dark blue), Black pants (knee length), and Black boots (flat).
She's a girl whose been a slave for almost her whole young adult life.But everything changed when she met him. The Surgeon of Death.This is a Trafalgar X OC fanfic. This is my first time writing a story, so sorry for my common mistakes guys. Please read and vote.

Wow. Nice I like it considering it's ur first try well done.
Ok so i'm in english class avoiding writing an essay and this story is making me almost scream in excitement. It is difficult to hold in. Save me. English sucks.
One_Piece4Life One_Piece4Life Aug 30, 2015
Thank you.. I really appreciate it.. And thank you for your comments.
death_robz death_robz Aug 29, 2015
I like it. Though you did some changes. And some sentences were repeated and some were lacking. Yet, it was good. I get the situation.
death_robz death_robz Aug 29, 2015
hehehe, nice one.. You know what, I also love Trafalgar Law too.. But you did good, for first try. Continue with your work. I'm sure some other readers will read this. Good Luck.