Poems

Poems

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Shax Rodriguez By shaxlepanda Completed

Different types of poems. Things i think about when there is nothing to do and the four walls around my room make me feel claustrophobic.

kbagsbunny kbagsbunny Nov 16, 2012
Your poems, your writing i can tell you go through them. Your in the motion and i love that. I think we can all relate to them and they are just so amahzing... keep writing, can't wait for more!
AllThatsLeftOfMe AllThatsLeftOfMe Nov 16, 2012
"You scream, you cry, you go through life..." I know it's out of order, but I like the way you switch it up a bit. :)
CCallahan CCallahan Nov 14, 2012
This is awesome. I love it.  I love your cover art too. But this poem is truly great. It's got a lot of tension built into it and then the breath at the end is timed perfectly. Reading it I could almost feel the relief of the narrator.
bee123 bee123 Mar 23, 2012
I love all of them they are amazing an your pomes explain me and i wanted to cry when I read YOUR poems :)
DarkxMagicxAnimex DarkxMagicxAnimex Sep 27, 2010
I loved it. Just the whole idea was awesome on its own. -voting, fanning- <3
Ryuzaki_L Ryuzaki_L Sep 26, 2010
wow
                              this is really good
                              
                              ill vote
                              plse read and vote my vampire poem
                              its pretty funny, its about why, in your right mind should never give a vampire flowers.
                              
                              
                              http://www.wattpad.com/634237-never-give-a-vampire-flowers
                              
                              thanx so muxh  XD