She Been Back Stabbed By So Many Of Her Loved Ones But She Still Standing & With A New Love Interest🖖
Lines were well written. I could really see the scenes come alive. This was great! The pacing was on point.
I wish she not talk in to much slang can't really understand some of the things you say I be lost also can you space when you say who pov it is
thank heavens you don't put a full stop at every other word. and I'm loving the fact that you she real words.. and not just the American street talk; not every one will
don't switch p.o.v often and don't capitalize the first letter
of every word.