Magcon Slave *Needs Editing*

Magcon Slave *Needs Editing*

47.1K Reads 664 Votes 28 Part Story
Maya✌ By aye_rebel Completed

Chloe Paine family is rich but treat her like garbage but Chloe parents give her away to 9 boys her age will he life change will she find love?

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Haha I'm sorry but it's funny when it says my thing, his thing.
What happened to "Nash I'm a virgin😱" like erm ok!!! GOTTA BLAST
As....romantic of a story this is, maybe you could consider fixing the grammar, and putting in a bit more description?  You're making an effort, but it honestly could use some touching up.  Good luck, doll 😍
I'm sorry it just makes me laugh everytime it says thing. "Told me to suck his thing... licking my thing...rubbing his thing on mine. I think it's really funny for some reason. 😂
tay_taylor69 tay_taylor69 Nov 13, 2015
roses are red, porcupines are prickly, may I say that escalated quickly
tay_taylor69 tay_taylor69 Nov 13, 2015
roses are red, porcupines are prickly, may I say that escalated quickly