The Broken Hearted Horse

The Broken Hearted Horse

12.6K Reads 638 Votes 17 Part Story
SkayaM By SkayaM Completed

Heart's Secret is an abused horse. One day she is rescued and she is bought by several people, but they all fail to tame her. Until one girl pops into her life. Over time the two trust each other. The girl is able to train Secret but when several events happen, Secret finds herself in the same situation as before she was rescued. Many people have started to notice Secret and they know she has a special talent. But will they be able to gain her trust to ever see her ability?

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  • abuse
  • adventure
  • fiction
  • horse
  • realistic
Trombolii Trombolii Jun 26
Cute read! I'm such a sucker for a good girl/horse story :) My only question is how does a horse smile? Maybe you could add some more horse-ish action/description to show the same thing?
maddienikole8 maddienikole8 Feb 15, 2017
I get it. "Hearts Secret" like from the life of a horse. I LOVE IT
Foreverinblujeans Foreverinblujeans Sep 13, 2015
Good start.  Different to read something from a horses point of view and like the idea behind the story.  Perhaps go over it again and 'flesh' it out. Put some more emotion and descriptive language in there and you'll be onto a winner.
googleuser31510 googleuser31510 Mar 03, 2015
It's great so far,although I noticed that it says eachother when they're trying goget the horse in the truck