My Online Identity

My Online Identity

15.9K Reads 750 Votes 26 Part Story
Erika By countrygal1323 Completed

"Hey."

"Hay is for horses."

Meet Alexandria Sanders and Jasper Alder. Alexia's the shy, new girl in town while Jasper has been here for as long as he can remember. Little do they know, those two lines have started something they never expected to find on that small little chat site; love. 

With seemingly harmless lies and plenty of drama with friends the picture perfect pair grow together to overcome anything. Even people they were desperate to forget.

-mashton- -mashton- Oct 16, 2014
I suggest writing a chapter of about 1500-2500 words, at least three to four pages.
                              
                              and add more details on what she feels about the guy. I think you haven't mentioned their names yet. or is it going to be revealed on more chapters.
tesswritesbooks tesswritesbooks Oct 03, 2014
This chapter felt a little longer. I would like to know how the main character is feeling though.
tesswritesbooks tesswritesbooks Oct 03, 2014
This chapter was good! I liked how the conversation was so normal. It gave the book a good feeling.
                                Adding more detail would be a good idea though. I really did like this chapter though!
polestar01 polestar01 Sep 05, 2014
Short chapter but it was interesting :)
                              I was a bit confused about who the girl was :p
Peacefulness76 Peacefulness76 Aug 21, 2014
Again, short chapter, but it kind of have this effect on me that makes me want to read more and go read the next chapters.
                              
                              This story was inspired of My Wattpad Love? Then hopefully yours is amazing because MWL is just awesome!
                              
                              :)
Clatyrs Clatyrs Aug 20, 2014
Wattpad! What's the title of the story you are creating? lol jk