My Bad Boy Alpha Male

My Bad Boy Alpha Male

303K Reads 3.9K Votes 14 Part Story
Vanessa Evans By MoonGoddessLuna Updated Feb 25, 2015

Selene Robins has just escaped her abusive father and relocated from Colorado to Delaware. Selene has always wanted somebody to love her and complete her, she wants a mate. And what happens when she crosses paths with Cole MacRyrie, the school's notorious bad boy. Oh and did I mention Alpha? Will she be able to endure the battle of wits and seduction with the playboy while still fighting her inner demons? What happens when Daddy dearest comes knocking back into her life?

- - May 01, 2015
The only thing I can see is make the chapters a little longer ... But that's probably it your an amazing writer :)
happysmilesnotsadone happysmilesnotsadone Nov 27, 2013
Your really good you write amazing one day you will be a writer
Bundles_ToFlee Bundles_ToFlee Nov 10, 2013
In every single story I read one of the characters is played by Alex Pettyfer lol!!!!! Anyway love your story
MoreMadMusic MoreMadMusic Jun 09, 2013
Omg,ok this keeps geting beter and better every sentence!!!i have to go and read the next chapter!!!<3
_the_new_world_ _the_new_world_ Apr 24, 2013
You do need to write more and make sure everything you write you re-read and think about it as if you were the reader.
Vintage_Kisses Vintage_Kisses Apr 15, 2013
Really good, but I think rereading your chapters would help a little:), but otherwise its good.