The Picture

The Picture

608 Reads 12 Votes 5 Part Story
j94ever By j94ever Updated Jun 18, 2011

Leslie was just a stressed out high school student when the mysterious Caleb showed up at her sixteenth birthday party. A year later, Leslie's suffering from a chronic case of bad luck and the human world seems to be in the same boat. As Leslie realizes that her bad luck and the world's turmoil is related, Caleb comes back and takes her to Allah Domaie, a world of another dimension. This is where he teaches Leslie about her magical heritage. Allah Domaie is under attack by Belladona, a sorceress who is bent on taking over all the dimensions and Leslie is the only Witch powerful enough to take her down. The problem is that Leslie's ancestor line hasn't practiced magic in over a hundred thousand years, so she's completely disconnected from her powers.  But there are still a lot of things that her new friends in Allah Domaie are hiding from her. Can she unlock their secrets before they kill her? Can she master her powers before Belladonna takes over everything? And can she keep Caleb, her soul mate, the love of her life, after she's done what she came to do?

EarthWolf11 EarthWolf11 Nov 20, 2011
wow this is gd, really grabs the reader, good grammar etc. this is really gr8:D keep writing;) gonna read on:P voted!!
janinejamie2 janinejamie2 Mar 29, 2011
dammit....another good one...ill be looking for updates again...damn you...:)