Feathers of the Fallen

Feathers of the Fallen

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Sydney By bandgeek124 Updated Apr 01, 2011

The one word that can change the entire fate of humanity. An action that is simple as breathing. The word itself has a power that can bring down civilization, a power that can terrorize even the hardest of hearts. The thought it brings can tear down the strongest of walls, can creep along the oceans in searching of its next victim.
War.
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H.A.W.K.S = Highly Advanced Warfare Kinetic Soldiers


Auora didn't mean to be born like this, to be born to become a weapon of mass destruction. Even if it came with wings that willed her to fly. But it did happen. Now she has to sacrifice herself into the war, to be like one of them.

MorganAshley MorganAshley Apr 04, 2011
This deserves more attention! You're good at describing the action scenes, and the main character's personality is brilliant. There are some parts that could use some editing, but overall it's great.