Yellow Dawn

Yellow Dawn

232 Reads 14 Votes 1 Part Story
StandingBear By StandingBear Completed

Friend .. desert

Ash_Fern Ash_Fern Oct 20, 2014
This is a really beautiful poem! I've never been to a desert, and this poem makes me wish I'd not just visit it in my mind :'D Your words paints a beautiful and tranquil scenery I hope I may someday visit
lkrice lkrice Sep 26, 2014
I love this....i revisit this poem many times as I look at the mountains here. My heart sings in  and with mountains.  ;-)))
ShannonKellie ShannonKellie Jul 25, 2014
You are attuned to nature as well.  This is peaceful and I can see this place from how describe it.  I did enjoy this.  thank you for suggesting this poem to me.
StandingBear StandingBear Apr 21, 2012
@Amuse-bouche  AB, visiting Superstition Mountains in Arizona Is a healing of sorts. One is able to replenish their spirit there, high boulders upon the mountains take Native Indian's facial shapes and their spirits can be heard...If one has the time to explore. Glad you enjoyed! :-)
StandingBear StandingBear Apr 21, 2012
@WordSlinger  Thank you John for reading and your great comments and most of all for the Wattpad invite! Great place to be amongst poets! SBear
StandingBear StandingBear Apr 21, 2012
@NotHereAnyLonger  Anyone who has spent some time in the desert mountains can attest to the wonder and natural beauty thriving there. All you've related is felt with great magnification. Your comments are most kind. SBear