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Sonnet No. III:  Heaven's Sill

Sonnet No. III: Heaven's Sill

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Olan Smith By CottonJones Completed

This sonnet started out as verse in my college roommate’s senior yearbook as we both looked forward to our future lives outside the protection of our college.  Over the years it evolved and last year I took the poem and made it into this sonnet, “Heaven’s Sill”.  Revised: 10-23-13.

spm91212 spm91212 Feb 14, 2013
Yes it sounds very much like a Snip and Tweak poem...
                              I also love that you continued to tweak it over time and turned it in to a beautiful sonnet.  A fitting tribute to its former glory... Thanks for sharing it. I really enjoyed it... Thanks...
CottonJones CottonJones Feb 14, 2013
@spm91212 Thank you, David, as I felt it fit the theme of your poem.  LPF, Olan
spm91212 spm91212 Feb 14, 2013
Wow Olan... What a gem....
                              I am glad you revealed it to me... It is a gorgeous, peaceful,
                              I really enjoyed it thanks...
CottonJones CottonJones May 27, 2012
@bellereve23 Thank you for you kind comment on this sonnet.  Love, peace and freedom (LPF), Olan
CottonJones CottonJones Feb 23, 2011
@CottonJones Thanks Stefy,  I replied but forgot to click the reply button so you never got notice of the reply, smile; I am still learning the ins and outs of this site.  Olan.
CottonJones CottonJones Feb 21, 2011
@WordSlinger Thank you my good friend for commenting on this sonnet.  I hope all is well and will drop by soon.  Olan.