TWIST AND TURNS

TWIST AND TURNS

159 Reads 4 Votes 1 Part Story
E-rance By E-rance Updated Feb 12, 2011

This is a story about an ordinary girl called Kaylee who was lucky enough to experience love but fate is always separating her with her loved one.

E-rance E-rance Mar 13, 2011
@hotpinklipstick yea lyk u said it's not ur fault mayb mine n my editors anywayz thnx 4 de comment,i tried correcting some mistakes hoppe it is nice thx again 4 reading it sorry 4 bieng rude.
                              
E-rance E-rance Mar 11, 2011
@hotpinklipstick ok that was not even encouraging ,u know what pliz try to b nice to people don,t correct someone wid harshness
                              
E-rance E-rance Mar 08, 2011
@hotpinklipstick :honestly i haven,t understood what u,ve just elaborated pliz try to slow down when it comes to explanation,like i said am just new .any thnx 4 the comment
                              
E-rance E-rance Mar 08, 2011
@DainaHangengDai :Thanx for the comment,pliz tell me the name of your syory and i'll read and vote.
E-rance E-rance Mar 07, 2011
@Stupid_CupiD thnx anyway but i was not shouting at anyone by the way i liked your story
Stupid_CupiD Stupid_CupiD Mar 07, 2011
hey , some grammar and punctuation errors, elaborate the plot,don't use much of Capital letters, readers dont want you to shout  i am not being mean just want you to improve.... keep writing ..since your first story i am gonna vote :)