"The first time I met Nate Sommers, everyone was screaming like they’d just seen a man putting on a ski mask in their bank."
Meet Eden, a girl torn between the real world and far more glittery one of impending fame.
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. We got a sense of most of the characters which is fantastic but I still think that you should have maybe describes Nathan and Edie a bit too.
@hotyels Ah, that's me and my love of Bible names. Thanks, though!
this is really good and funny but i dont really like the names but that is just me great story you have impossbley good write
OMG!! I love your books and your style of writing! I read your comment in the discussion and the funniness is not in you head!! Could you read my story and tell me what you think?? It's called how my best friend became my enemy.
@tianajade Thanks, could you point out any grammar/spelling errors if you have a second, though, please? I'd like to get them cleared up!
Thanks to everyone else - you're all being so lovely! I'm trying to return the favour now.
Really good story. Upload soon and I will definitely keep reading.