May The Foam Be My Voice

May The Foam Be My Voice

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Michelle By ReinaStar Completed

A short story that combines the Disney version of "The Little Mermaid" and its original version. What if Ariel had to follow the rules that the mermaid in the original "The Little Mermaid" had to follow? This is my spin on Ariel's thoughts before she would turn to foam, as was the fate of the mermaid in the original story. Some parts in the story were created by myself for plot reasons.

  • ariel
  • eric
  • love
  • mermaid
  • moonlight
  • sea
lexiavila73001 lexiavila73001 Feb 02, 2014
Its not loading is it only supposed to be only two pages long?
infinityhope0 infinityhope0 Jan 12, 2014
Shit... This is really sad. It's beautiful, moving, and sad.
barbie23 barbie23 Mar 08, 2012
Wow, that was sad, and intense. 
                              Your a really good writer, keep it up ;)
writtenwithwords writtenwithwords Mar 07, 2012
i love this! it is very descriptive :D The image this creates in my head is very vivid! You should make more spin offs!
- - Mar 06, 2012
this is wonderfully absolutely perfect! your words describe so much, and i love those kind of stories, spin on fairytales...i just love it! And love ur title XD
Isis_Willow Isis_Willow Mar 04, 2012
I love this, because I'm a sucker for original fairy tails. I love the way you did this and I was absorbed into the words. I also have to say the title is what braught me here at first! I love it, :))