Samplestory histórias

I'm starting to write small samples of my writing to get people's opinions on it. They are very short but I will have a lot. Let me know what you think!

Sample of Story in progress

16 year old Paisleigh Lively is a tomboy. She prefers tennis shoes over sandals, pants over skirts, pizza over Chipotle, and root beer over Starbucks. Her sister and mom...

A sample story of my writing. Just a short story.lol

"My name is Eric and I am a vampire." ---------- Medora's brother died in a car crash three months ago. So, anyone could imagine her surprise to find him back...