Givemefeedback Verhalen

A short 3 some sex story Must read

Your name is Maddison in this story. A woman saves your life and for some reason sticks around... You both are 21 as of the moment of the crash

This is a story I wrote as a stress reliever a while ago, I decided to pick it up again. As it goes currently, it follows from two characters perspectives. One perspecti...

This is a random story I got bored and created this. Make sure to leave comments and tune in.

just dabble poems that I think of

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Give me feed back please. What happens though the eyes of each child and mother. A mother may not see everything unlike a child.

Angel, Ariana,and Asia are just three normal girls. They just finished their middle school years and summer break is almost over. High school is just one week away. The...

a bond that broke from a feeling that has been forgotten

just me posting some of my poems, any (constructive) feedback would be greatly appreciated!!!! I own all content in this book as it is all my original work, including th...

A easy reader story based on modern situations blown out of proportion. A good mind thinking historical fiction that still needs to be finished. Check it out and tell me...

A futuristic description of how the world will decay from the point of view of a person embracing the outcome of her world. Even though the oil spill that ruined her ai...

Just gonna have to fins out yourself!!!

Dahlia Baxter just moved from the city to the middle of nowhere Maryland with her brother and best friend. Her perfect boyfriend throws her life completely out of order...

Jackson Boudelaire is overworked. His Mother and Father died in a car accident a few years prior, leaving him to take care of their debt to some shady organization and h...

We are writing a personal narrative for ELA .This is not a real story I'm just saying it is because I need a good grade lol. Pls give me feedback so I can get a kinda g...

The story is about two sister who never got along, finally seeing each other and it did not turn out so well. The more you get into the story, you will see how lies can...

The main character is wandering around in the woods to find a old man guarding a cave warning the kid saying not to enter. The kid ignores the old man and goes in anyway...

In the city of Lindoria, a group of college friends' lives take an extraordinary turn when they discover they possess superhuman abilities. As they navigate the complexi...